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so, meine erste geschichte die ich mich traue irgendwo zu posten großes Grinsen auf englisch, da ich wenn ich auf deutsch schreibe nie zufrieden bin...
es hat weder etwas mit Harry Potter noch mit irgendeinem anderen Buch/Film zu tun, alles komplett von mir erfunden. Ist ziemlich kurz, allerdings wüsste ich auch nicht wo ich noch mehr schreiben könnte. ein freund hat das ganze netterweise für mich durchgesehen und schon einiges an Rechtschreibfehlern korrigiert allerdings übernehme ich keine gewähr für richtige rechtschreibung und zeichensetzung, von der grammatik mal abgesehen großes Grinsen

Against the darkness

“Come with me, Lucia! I will give you a better life than this…this…”,

Seth said and looked around in the small hut in which Lucia lived. There was not much room in it, only enough for the necessary things, a bed, a table, a chair, a little kitchen and a bath. There were no pictures and only a few windows. At one of these windows stood a slim, tall woman with wavy, black hair seeming to look outside. A long time nobody said anything, then Lucia answered:

“No. At the moment my only wish is that you go away and never return. You’re no part of my life anymore, you’ve never been part of it.”

It cost her all her self-control, not to break down crying or not to scream loudly:“Out here!”. A half year ago this situation would have been an impossible task for her, but she was no longer the shy woman, she was a strong woman now, who could see with her heart and her other senses better than with her eyes. She was happy with this life, it was nothing spectacular but she loved it.

“I don’t need you, I live my own live and I don’t want to live yours. I’m not stupid.”

The last time Seth asked her to come with him she broke down and came into a hospital. But the doctors couldn’t help her, she got depressive. Finally someone found out who Seth was and what he wanted and what Lucia didn’t want. Someone had a good heart and helped her to build up a new life, far away from Seth or they thought that it was far away from Seth. But he found her and he wanted again that Lucia came with him.

“A long time I believed in everything you said but I changed my opinion. You know that as well as you know that I can speak for myself…Even if you don’t want to know it deep in your heart you know.”

Seth really know and his face showed two emotions fighting against each other. On the one hand there was his pride, his need to be always right and on the other there was a feeling he didn’t know until then, the feeling to have lost. Again it was quiet, then he tried to answer but he couldn’t. So he turned around and went to the door, when he stepped through the door he said:

“There is no woman in this world who can speak for herself or who is able to make the right decision. And you’re the last one in the world who can. You never learned how to make decisions and you are poor”

Lucia laughed:

“You’re poorer than I am. I’ve not much money but I can say if I was wrong, You can’t. I hope for you that you can one day and then you can come back and we will talk like adults to each other.”

She turned around, trying to catch the light with her dull eyes, and said:

“I’m blind but I can see better than you can, than you ever will be able to. For you a handicapped person has to live with other handicapped persons whether she or he can live or not with his or her handicap. I can live with mine better than you can without.”

When he was gone she was alone again, alone in the darkness. But she wasn’t frightened she had fought against the darkness and won.


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Ich find' den Oneshot echt gut. Ohne großes Drumherum - eben einfach nur ein Ausschnitt & das passt richtig gut.
Rundum eine tolle Geschichte (:

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